Many people walk in and out of your life, but only true friends leave footprints in your heart.
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Gobbolino « Thread Started on May 3, 2007, 8:24am »
Name: Gobbolino [Gob-o-lino]
Gender: Male
Age: 6 Months
Religion: StarClan
Clan/Class: None
Position: None
Home Town: x
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Quote: "Many people walk in and out of your life, But only true friends leave footprints in your heart."
Short Description: x
Description: Lino is still a kitten, so it is hard to say how he will turn out when he is older. Looking at him now with his over0sized head and paws, big pointed ears, long legs, he'll turn out to be a runner. A fast cat built for sped and endurance during battle. Lino is a very handsome cat even for his young age. He has a thick yet healthy looking coat or a midnight hue. In a lighter shade of black, he has tabby markings which he got from his mother. He has a long thin tail and a fluffy chest and cheeks. His eyes are a light blue. Such a sweet blue. As blue as the sky on a cloudless day. His left front paw looks like it has been dipped in white paint. He has no special markings, no scars. Still young and so much life still left in him.
Sweet and kind, this kitten is a real gentleman. He loves to play and mess about but never has any intention of hurting anybody. He has a naturally bubbly personality, it seems infectious. You just want to play and dance about with him. He isn't so bubbly now though, since he lost his best friend, he seems more drawn in, more determined. Though he is still a gentleman, being polite and friendly. He likes making new friends, but none with replace Tabby. She left ehr footprint in his heart and he'll never forget her sweet face and green eyes. To strangers he is polite enough, but wary. His dad taught him that not all cats are nice. He strongly beleives that there is life after death, and he also beleives that Tabby is alive. He is determined and strong willed when pushed to his limits.
History: Born into a human family, Lino was happy. He had his mother, father and two brothers. The human was nice enough. He lived on a farm and used Lino and the family to catch the rats and the mice. That was the first thing Lino was taught. Lino is good at catching fast scurrying things, for he has had lots of practise. His family and he lived in a shed full of hay. The had a little nest on one of the bails of hay. It was warm and cosy, albeit a little damp when it rained and a little cold in the winter. But Lino was happy.
Lino was taught to be a real gentleman, a good cat, not to hurt anyone or make someone feel bad. Lino was the more gentle ones out of his brothers. The other two kits were always play fighting while he was off chasing rats and daydreaming. He joined in a few times because his father told him he needed to learn how to be a fighter. He slowly learned, but isn't the best.
At five months old, one winter night, the old farmer died. The cats were thrown out for someone knew was moving in, and didn't want a family of stray cats living in their barn. The family traveled together, but in the winter weathers were harsh. His father went off to find food, but never came back. Lino never knew what happened to him, but he froze to death in the snow. Amazingly, Lino managed to stay alive. Though his brotehrs were tougher than he, Lino had a slightly thicker coat, inherited from his father, and curling up next to his mother he managed to stay warm. Lino dearly missed his brotehrs, but had no time to mourn them.
Six months old; Spring. He didn't know how, mut he and his mother survived. On sunny day, he woke up and his mother had gone. She had left because she couldn't raise him by herself. She needed food and shelter, she had no time to look after him. Lino was very sad and wandered about by himself for a few weeks. And then he met Tabetha. A bright orange Tabby cat. She had bright green eyes, long tail, long whiskers. She was the same age as he and they became firm friends. He met her while wandering about the woods. She had been a stray for most of her life, and they just seemed to stick.
They managed to eat with Lino's hunting skills, Tabetha's speed and a bit of teamwork. They slept together, laughed together, and everywhere he went, she went. Seven months and still best friends. They were walking in the forest, and didn't realize they had crossed a territory. A band of many cats surrounded them. They were mean, lethal cat-killing machines. Even though the two were mere kittens, they chased them away. Gobbolino and Tabetha got split up. Lino managed to escape, but he never knew what happened to Tab's.
Right now he spends most of his time looking for his best friend. They were so close it was almost as if they were family. He can't bear the though of loosing someone else precious to him. It's torn his little heart into two.
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Re: Gobbolino « Reply #1 on May 9, 2007, 7:22am »
You Need to fill in Clan/Class, Position, Home Town, and Short Descrption.
Those fields cannot be left blank
It would be prefered if you bolded the subject titles such as "Name, Age, Description, History, etc"
Your History...
Quote:
Born into a human family
This is a problem. The area these cats live in is /completely/ secluded form human life. No cat has ever seen a human, nor even heard of them. If a human even entured the area these cats were in, they would die.
Also in your history you say your cat is seven moons old, when you say in the age feild your cat is six. It would also be hard for such a young cat to survive alone in this environment, just keep that in mind.
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Re: Gobbolino « Reply #2 on May 10, 2007, 2:04pm »
I don't mind the brought-up-near-humans, or the age, but do consider that the Forest isn't exactly Mr. Nice Guy so you may want to re-think the kid's age. Appart from that, I'm all fine with this if you add a short desc.
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